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I love it!

Everything is awesome! Sure, the ending could have used another measure after the chick stopped talking but uit doesn't really effect anything.

Z-Tone responds:

sweet:D
thanks mate but yeah its not one of my favs
hate being stressed especially on time limit in competitions
could have made this one much better than it is
but again for the great review

[Superstring]

It'd be awesome for credits/replay button

I have only one issue with it, the bass. Theres a couple things about it actually. For starters, I don't thing its the right instruments for the strings. It's a little too... plucky if ya know what I'm sayin. Now the second thing is the fact that the lowest note on the bass feels TOO low. After a few plays through though, it doesn't bother me as much. So overall, its a cool ass loop.

Z-Tone responds:

thanks man:D
its actually a remix of a track called super string so its not ment to be a string thats just the name of the song

[-=R.E.D=-]

It'd actually be pretty sweet for a club beat.

The melody after 2:00 was the only thing that bothered me. You should not have made the rhythm just plain quarter notes. You should have mixed it up a little bit to give it a kind of satisfying dancy feel (You should have put the mix up in the area where the pitches changed). The instruments were perfect for the job though, couldn't have been any better actually. Thats my only fret with this song. Fix that up and it'd be perfect for a club dude (not a five star club though). The music kind of reminds me of deadmau5 actually (If you dont know who they are I suggest you figure out ASAP).

P.S. Thank you for putting white noise in there, it wouldn't be the same without it. People don't usually know how important it is in these kinds of songs.

Z-Tone responds:

duuude you must not understand trance:D
i listened to it after putting it only quarter notes.....SUCKED really sounded like some hands up track made by basshunter....unless thats what you have been listening to then you like hands up not trance (here its called dancemost of the times)
again trance track not dance the most change is in the beat not the melody it self make the progression to the build up worth the wait
ohh and by the way there are going to be vocals (essential for this type of trance) but that wont be uploaded here
and before you review another trance track listen to artist like rank 1, flutlicht and maybe some of the armada label
anyways thanks for the review
hope you take the hint:D

[-="The ParagonX9 Song"=-]

Alright!

Now, we all knew you were going to attract attention just by putting paragons name in the title, okay. I just had to get that out there (this of course is probably going to bring out people who will try to hate you for about no reason what so ever). On to the song, it was really promising, actually. I was surprised to be honest, I thought it'd be mediocre. The beggining piano part was a work of genius. It held the style of her music through the use same note key *good idea* but while changing it a bit to make it your own. The second melody didn't come out at sweet as I hoped it to (Her melodies usually come out with a huge bang screaming "We are a new friggin melody!"). Now an issue I noticed was repititivity *If thats a word*. The first melody is not as addicting as hers so you can't use it as much. As I continue on I'm like "This is pretty sweet" until i hit about 1:28. The piano part is too slow to be one of paragons piano parts. The notes are too spaced out and there is too little movement with the pitch to be like hers.The adjustment between 2:09 and 2:11 could use some more bass. Speaking of bass, it needs to be bigger. Bigger, not louder. More like the bass you'd hear ina club. Okay, on to the harsh part. The part after 2:11 disappointed me so badly dude. You SO shouldn't of put a melody in there that sounded smothered (Kind of like chaoz fantasy) instead the constant noise. It would've really worked out if the noise went along with that clicking noise every eighth note (With slight differences of course). So, I'm nearing the end thinking "This is by far the best tribute to her I've heard that did not rip her melodies". Then the final flaw comes. The way the drums degraded out of the song was HORRIBLE. Don't get me wrong, it didn't totally ruin the song but you have to find a way to get a rid of that high pitch noise that comes with the degredation of it (For the love of god though, do not just make it so the drums quiet down). On to the final instrument ending. The piano dragged on a bit too much even though the final chord was extremely satisfying. Also, the slow down speed was excellent. Seriously. So overall the song had its epic parts and it had its bombing parts. So truly, don't get offended, but I don't thing you quite hit what you were going for. You didn't quite fulfill the feeling of paragonx9. But, don't get discouraged dude. Create other songs for a few months, maybe a year, and come back and refine this sucker. This song has a ton of potential in it and by that time you'll have the skill to nail in the top five probably (Unless some epic flash game comes out around the same time like dark cut four with its epic songs). If that happens then you'll be in the top ten probably. Another thing, five hours? Only five hours? Then again a lot of it is reused (coughrepetitivecough). But still, five hours? You can't honestly expect a song that needs to hold a lot (because of the title) to be done in five hours do you? I give you an extra star for doing it in five hours. So anyway, you should most definitely redo this in the future.

Back to the song, the use of fade in a fade out timing was excellent. I think the hardness of the piano should be increased just a little. Also, the songs a bit quiet overall until like 1:09. The length of the song should be a little longer due to having so many different melodies and such because I honestly felt like the space time for the non-repetitive melodies was too short which means that the melodies were not quite satisfying enough *Yes, now I'm being nitpicky, or however you spell it, so that when you renew it, it is definitely going on my favorites*. Also, your held out notes that took me forever to notice should be just a little bit louder. Not to much though. Another thing, you probably might wanna find a way to make your a melodies a bit more addictive like paragons because that is truly how she find her ways to be epic. Her melodies are like orgasms in your friggin ear *Except her new song that I don't really like*. Wow, I can't say any more because I'm out of space.

[Techno in the sewer]

Hey it was actually pretty good

I Like the fact that you used a bunch of different instruments. Granted, there were a few issues *your snare rolls for example sucked*. So I think you should keep making techno.

P.S. The melody was AWESOME.

[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 3]

Oh my god,

208 patterns?! That's friggin godly, my song only have like 15... hmmm, guess that's where I'm going wrong.

[Uhn Tiss]

Toxic biohazard user XD

I like how you were able to use it at a slow tempo rate and still have it sound halfway decent, horrible choice of base drum though. You should of made it a club kick. Screwed up ending :(. You don't usually just want it to just end. Where you put spaces you should put fx or egg ons. For endings it should prolly be fade out or fx. You also need some more manuevering of pitch when it comes to biohazard. You have to find the breaks in the biohazard to do that though, it takes a while :/.

VampIce responds:

hahaha ye i figured it takes a while lol xD. But i only started last week hahaha and with the trial version its extremely annoying because the toxic biohazard just cuts out randomly cause its programmed like that.. im gna try get into the coding and redo that little annoyance and maybe the song will sound better and im gna work on the fading abit :D

[Jenova's Theme Metal FF7]

Dude

How do you get your guitars to sound like that? Seriously, I need to know XD.

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Well I ran my guitar through my podxt. That's about it as far as tone goes. Or are you talking about the delayed intro? For that I just had three tracks that had the lead on it and shifted one track a quarter note back and then the other a half note back. Pretty simple to do. Also a lot less work than setting up a delay.

[Techno First]

For improvements...

You could kind of lay off drums that heavy but whats there is decent.

[Breathe - hania]

wow :O

I really need to know where you get the inspiration to create these songs. Seriously, I want to know.

hania responds:

Life. That's my inspiration. And yes, it may sound corny or really broad, but it's the truth :) If something happens to me, or someone I know, and I go through an emotion, I try and portray it in a song. (The story could be completely different, but the feeling is there - and that is what makes a song real ... well, that's just what I think)
Hope that helps!
-hania