Dude.
You oughtta try zooming out to make a bigger fighting field instead of using a dynamic camera on a such a small one. Two more thing. Timing. the ending went by way too fast and some of the text went by way too slow. Music. Fix it. Don't leave it on playing after the movie finished. And pick something a little better but well, that's your taste. Not mine.
P.S. Give the battles a little more time. I can't tell you how many times I have seen videos of one dude owning the hell out of the other one.
I give ya 1/2. The characters were kinda lame too. No offense but spend some more time on em.