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My first story line

Posted by gamergod1995 - April 28th, 2009


Okay, this is an older one. It takes place in another dimension that is identical to ours except that primates evolve much faster *that includes us silly :3*. Well because of different beliefs and stuff we evolved into three different kinds of creatures.

Angels *I know, how unoriginal*:
-Got wings
-Nails grow longer and faster
-Wings made from feathers and are kept together by seperate bones *each singular feather can be controlled*
-Newborns don't aquire wings until they become 13
-13-18 year olds wingspan is 1-3 feet *only ones with the greatest skill can fly*
-wingspan grows MUCH larger at eighteen *grow up to 6 feet*
-Angels are very fast and agile but have a humans strength.
-Angels make up about 7% of the population
-An angels height vary's from around 5' 10" to 8' 9"
-Angels learn a little faster than humans
-Angels are the positive side of the spectrum
-Angels don't trust any other kind at all
-Angels love pie, I'm not even kidding
-Angels lose energy and eventually die when in the darkness for too long
-Angels don't eat or drink *They live completely off of solar energy *not artificial light**
-Angels don't have testoserone or estrogen
-Angels have small genitals *Other creatures pick on them for that*
-Angels support christianity *duh*
-Angels often get picked on by humans in schools but are too nice to react
-Angels have above average hand to eye coordination
-Angels lack in communication skills
-Everything else about them is human like
-Angels can only get pregnant by their soul mate.
-They can sense their soul mate through a sixth sense
-The angels main color is blue

So that kid in school that is too afraid to prove hinself but DOES have the skills and that is picked on often is probably an angel.

Demons *pretty predictable huh?*:
-Got wings
-Nails and teeth grow faster than an angels
-Wings are like a dragons *just not as huge silly XD*
-Newborns have very small wings *only a few inches*
-Wings go away at twelve and grow inside the body
-Wings reappear in the twenties
-Wings bust out of the body and spray a goopy, clear-ish liquid *looks almost like infected puss* all over the place *the pouch that the wings were contained in contained this liquid to disallow stress upon the rest of the body.
-Wings are HUGE *The wingspan is about twenty feet*
-Demons are strong but slow *about the speed of a fat guy*. Don't defy their intelligence though. Many are smarter than angels.
-Demon make up about 18% of the population
-Demons range from 6' 2" to 14' 0".
-Demons are obviously the negative side of the spectrum
-Demons are fine with everything except angels
-Demons love alcohol.
-Demons actually like the light even though they see very well in darkness
-Demons have twice as much testosterone and twice as much estrogen than the average human.
-Demons have above average genitals
-Demons are usually atheist although some differ
-Demons pick on people but not insanely like bullies
-Demons think violence is the way to shut someone up.
-Demons love sex with everyone except the new kind that has just shown up in the world
-Demons can't get pregnant with anyone except demons
-Demons stay pregnant for two months *that's it XD*
-Demons HATE getting pregnant
-Demons excel in communication
-Everything else is human like
-The demons main color is red

That kid that goes around dating everyone in your school is probably a demon.

Elementals:
-Don't have wings
-Nails grow smoother and more ovular than a humans
-They CAN fly *they manipulate the air around them to do this*
-They can manipulate the four elements obviously
-They usually excel at only one element but can still use the rest really well
-Elementals learn to use their powers at any age *including in the womb*
-Elementals can improve their abilities through rigorous training
-An elementals dominant power also depends on his/her attitude and horoscope
-The elementals are average in everything but are extremely intelligent to the point where most have telekinesis
-They take up about 2% of the population
-They range from 5' 4" to 6' 2"
-They are the intelligent side of the spectrum
-They treat everyone equally
-Elementals love sushi
-Elementals love twilight *not the book stupid XD*
-Elementals have average testosterone, but above average estrogen.
-They have above average genitals too
-They are usually pagan
-They are a bit insecure
-They try reasoning at first but won't hesitate to use violence
-They like sex more than humans but its not such a big deal
-They can get pregnant with humans and other elementals
-The babies that are born with humans still become normal elementals
-They are good when communicating but prefer to keep to their own selves
-Everything else is human like
-Their color is yellow

This kid is usually quite until you get to know them. They usually are superstitious though

The annihilators:
-No wings
-About the size of the left4dead tank
-Colossus like genitals
-Nearly undestroyable
-Can pick up the sears tower with arms
-Is killing everything
-There are only 20 in the whole world
-The rest is unkown

This is just some background information that your going to need to know :D. I'll post the rest some other time.

P.S. The picture is a left4dead tank.

My first story line


Comments

Left for dead is a cool game
But the tank is scary

I love teh tankzors, what do you think about the other creatures?

Although a few facts stick out like a sore thumb, most of them sound pretty plausible reguarding realism.

you mind telling them to me so I can fix em?

Ok... about time I got around to this... (regarding your reply to my last comment)

-Angels often get picked on by humans in schools but are too nice to react
Reason: If your pretty nice, your bound to get friends who support you, but then again a lack of communication might cause a few problems with this logic

-Angels love pie, I'm not even kidding
Reason: I thought they would be crazy over anything super sweet, but I guess pie is one of the few treats with 80% sugar (figure of speech there)

-Angels don't trust any other kind at all
Reason: well... maybe they trust certain humans but I guess this is actually pretty real

-Demons excel in communication
Reason: I don't think its that there good in communication, they probably only do that in an attempt to work at getting what they want.

Elemental's: not overly sure I should make my statements since before this, I thought elemental's were just living entities of a specific element (fire, water, etc)

Plus I never heard of an annihilator before...

and before I leave, these are just my personal beliefs and shouldn't be taken 100% seriously

1)Pretty true, when I said lack of communication I kind of meant that they are (usually) extremely introverted and tend to not talk at all. So they never really talk to people (lets face it, most people hate what they don't understand) and because they never usually speak they don't end up learning those communication skills so when they do open up their mouths something meaningful comes out really stupid.

2)I really have no comment except the fact that pie is simply awesome.

3)Your reason is spot on.

4)I meant that they are extremely charming and use it to their advantage, they can manipulate a politicians mind pretty easily.

5)Yea, they are entities that have taken the form of human beings because evolution allowed the human brain to meld into them allowing for a dual personality most of the time. The thing is, is that the dual personality isn't actually a personality (it can be). It is a voice inside the humans head allowing for the abilities of both beings to go into eachother. Wow, if you can understand that, your awesome ^.^. Because honestly, if it didn't come from my head I wouldn't have been able to understand it XD.

6)I figured that I would create an extremely destructable creature that would force all beings to unite or die :3.

P.S. I'm not an opinion hater XD, I've matured about 80% of the way :D.